Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
My amazing family tree
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Hey Catherine, it's me CariDee here. Whoa, That's so cool that your family was originally from China. I can't wait for you to write the rest of you family member's. I don't think you need to change anything. From CariDee
ReplyDeleteHello Catherine it's Eloise from korimako today I got asked to comment on a Toroa students blog. I think that you did really well on this task with making it clear that your family came from China.In term 1 in korimako we learned about our familys.Mabye next time you could tell us who Kelly is or who Daniel is it make it a bit clearer. Over all I think you did really well on this task. From Eloise
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