Friday, August 9, 2019
Persuasive writing
Today at writing, our teacher told us that we had to do some persuasive writing. I chose to do a topic on why school should be fun! This is still a work in progress, please comment to me if you want me to fix or add something.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Catherine I really like how you put in sounds from a real piano for the piano stairs.mabe next time you could make it a wee bit more clear that CDEFGABC and Do Re Mi Fa Sol La Te Do are for the piano but still you did a good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks Olivia! But, next time check if I had changed my topic, cause now I'm doing, why YOU should NOT give up when you fail at something!
ReplyDeleteCatherine